2. In a previous assignment, you wrote an introduction article in the “F” pattern. Based on what we discussed in class and based on the feedback provided in class, write a new introductory “content” incorporating “plain English writing for the web” in the “F” pattern including visuals. You are to include your “revised version” (if the version you submitted was not in the F-Pattern). Ensure that it addresses the three main objectives of plain English writing. As a reminder, this is an introductory post for your business. Ensure you list it in your hardcopy. (12 Marks)
Answer:
My Old Introduction article
Introduction
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My New Introduction article
Express Yourself with Resin Creations
Welcome to Resins by Lashly!
At Resins by Lashly, we believe every piece tells a unique story. Our handmade, personalized resin products are crafted to reflect your individuality. Whether you’re looking for beautiful home décor, unique accessories, stunning jewelry, or fun DIY kits, we’ve got something special for you.
What We Offer:
- High-Quality Products – Crafted with care to last.
- One-of-a-Kind Creations – Custom pieces made just for you.
- Premium Supplies – Everything you need to create your own masterpieces.
- Fully Personalized – Each item is made to match your style and personality
Create your own unique story
All changes are reference from what i did in assignment one and power points briscoe wk8- plain language